Today class is in the lab, Miss Zu ask our group to present
our thesis statement.
These are the thesis statement that we present
Although less people believe in it but the predictions
of the doomsday has already make people being aware of it as the Mayan
prophecy, Nasa scientists and the continuous disaster keeps showing their
evidence about the day of judgment
Even though only small group of people that believes about
the forecast of the end of the world but the rumor already make people being
alert about the doomsday as the Mayan prophecy, Nasa scientists and the
continuous disaster that happened gave their thought and proofs about the
Despite the fact that only a few people have no doubt with
the forecast but still the predictions has already gain attentions from people
around the world as the Mayan prophecy, Nasa scientists and the continuous
disaster always happened.
When we presenting it Miss Zu ask our
classmate to comment about it. Then she said that our thesis statement is sound
like argumentative and we have to be a little bit more specific. We have to
redo it again and show the new thesis
statement to Miss Zu before 6.00 p.m. So these is the thesis statement that she
"The end of the world has been predicted many times, and none of it
becomes true, however, due to the Mayan prophecy, prediction of scientists and
the continuous disaster that happened make people started to prepare themselves
to confront the doomsday".